I'd agree with you if you'd remove one M from your final sentence though.
Jewel is in motion from the first sentence to the last.
She and Rick had found themselves arguing almost from the first sentence.
From the first sentence on, it seemed apparent that she hadn't discovered my secret.
"I promise it will grab you from the first sentence," she said.
But all the way through, from the first sentence to the last, was sounded the note of hurt and disappointment.
Three years were later remitted from his sentence on 30 August 1947.
Also the removal of the word 'stadiums' from the second sentence.
Just not as dramatic as the author would like us to think from the lead sentence.
The court said yesterday that the 17 months he had already served would be deducted from his sentence.