The second issue is that the author chose to criticize a sentence that appeared in a draft paper of the writing committee.
"The draft white paper does not recommend as a sound practice that firms move out of center-city locations," they wrote.
He worked countless nights and weekends, drawing the plans on draft paper.
The draft paper from Livermore, I guess you've already seen.
The other office entrance leads to a workshop with piles of white models, discardedafter use like draft paper.
On the other hand, the draft paper contains some "great" proposals for "community design" and "green infrastructure".
The nations at the meeting must start by adopting more ambitious goals than the modest objectives laid out in the draft papers.
A draft paper on the proposed arrangements is available for comment.
The world's press picked up on the story and the Guardian wrote a leading article, siding with those burning their draft papers.
There is a good suggested list here in Austria's draft paper, but it is simply not comprehensive enough.